2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.
The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.
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| Only certain infrastructure projects rise to the level of an icon, yet Brooklyn Bridge is one that clearly has. |
1. I really liked how you guys included information on John Boeling's life and how the construction of the bridge came about.
ReplyDelete2. I think more information on John Boeling's death could've provided more background for the presentation but nonetheless great job!
1:You did a good job of telling the overall history of the bridge and what it means to the city.
ReplyDelete2: I personally would have discussed Boelings death more.
1. I like the brochure that you guys handed out, it was a fun creative way to include something unique in your presentation.
ReplyDelete2. I think that the construction of the bridge was well talked about but what about the perseverance of the bridge and if any touch ups have been needed since the original building of the bridge.
I think the humor used, especially about trying to call the mayor's office, was used well to keep everyone entertained.
ReplyDeleteI think that it would've been interesting to learn more about the bridge as portrayed in popular culture.
1. I thought the brochure was a neat addition to your overall presentation. Your slideshow was also really good.
ReplyDelete2. I was left wanting to know the effects of the bridge on society and maybe the purpose of it.
1. I really liked the brochure that you guys handed out, it made the presentation really fun and entertaining. You guys also were very knowledgeable on the history of the bridge too.
ReplyDelete2. I was left curious to know more about Boelings death. It was kinda odd how he tried to treat himself and how it lead to his death, but I think I was left more curious on the details of that.
1. I thought you guys had a lot of good info and I really liked how you not only talked about the bridge, but focused a lot on the creators. I thought you guys spoke really well.
ReplyDelete2. I thought there were a lot of words on each of your slides, and it took a little bit away from you guys and your presenting. I would've liked to hear more about how the bridge helped/affected people.
1. I thought that you had very interesting facts as well as lots of information on how it was built that was interesting, I also loved the brochure it made it funny
ReplyDelete2. I think a little more information on the bridge today and mabye a little bit about how it has shaped the people and places around it l.
1. I enjoyed the enthusiasm you brought to the presentation and the handout you both created.
ReplyDelete2. I only found a few areas to fall short and one of them was how it is iconic to America other than that great job with general understanding and info.
1. I feel like you had good enthusiasm and had a good amount of knowledge about your topic.
ReplyDelete2. I feel like there was a little confusion during the transitions of slides and who was supposed to talk about them. Other than that I enjoyed the presentation.
1. I enjoyed the handouts you had for the presentation and you seemed to have an understanding on the history behind the Brooklyn Bridge.
ReplyDelete2.You gave a lot of good information on the history of the family that designed and built the bridge, but it seemed like you could have gone more into the bridge in a more modern sense.
I really liked the way you guys explained the history of the bridge and why it is so important to the people around there.
ReplyDeleteI really felt that the information on the slides was too much but other than that it was really good.
1. I really liked how you made a brochure and that you included a lot of background information and related it to why its important for Americas society.
ReplyDelete2. I felt like you read directly form the slides alot and didn't know how to pronounce some of the names of things. I would practice and learn how to say those names or dont include them in your presentation.
1. I loved the brochure provided but I was VERY upset that the event was not real.
ReplyDelete2. I felt that you got off topic a little bit and could have focused less on the history of the man who designed the bridge and more on the bridge itself
1- I think your presentation overall was very informative. I actually liked your lead in with John Roebling. The timeline of your presentation was very effective.
ReplyDelete2- I may have explained the social structure the bridge has. i.e, what it stands for for people rather than just being the "eighth wonder of the world".