2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.
The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.
I think you did a well job with touching upon Galileo's other achievements through physics. Maybe putting pictures of his telescope and talking more about how the telescope came to be and why.
ReplyDelete1. Your tone was really good throughout the presentation and I really enjoyed the historical facts and extra details that you gave like with his theories, the church's control, and the inquisition. This made it really entertaining and fun to listen to.
ReplyDelete2. If there was anything to possibly improve on it would be to maybe show and describe a few more diagrams on his theories and inventions.
1. you guys did very well, there was great details provided through out the presentation on his life and his accomplishments.... good job!
ReplyDelete2. Something to improve would be to would be to maybe mention more on how he was scrutinized for his beliefs and heliocentrism.
1. It was very informative because I had not known much about Galileo at all before your presentation.
ReplyDelete2. I think I would have added more to the slideshow (pictures) & talked about his beliefs a little more.
1: You did a good job of showing who Galileo was to people who might only know him from telescopes
ReplyDelete2: I would have added more info on how he dealt with the church and survived against them.
1. Your presentation was really interesting and I feel like I learned more about Galileo and what he's contributed to society.
ReplyDelete2. One thing that could've improved the presentation would be narrowing down the broader subjects which could've shortened the presentation a little bit. Good job!
1. I think you did amazing for the time you had, you fit a lot of info into a small time frame.
ReplyDelete2. I wish there would have been more visuals just to help me understand more.
1. I think you did a good job by digging deeper into what others thought.
ReplyDelete2. It seemed lie you guys didn't practice at all and i think by doing so would of made the presentation flow a bit better.
1. I liked how you presented more information about Galileo than just things about the telescope.
ReplyDelete2. I would have liked a few more visuals to help describe some of his achievements or theories. I see how this would be hard due to how old the topic is.
1. I loved the wigs!
ReplyDelete2. I would have enjoyed seeing more of Galileo's work.
I really liked how you guys talked about more than just what he did in astronomy, since that’s what most know him for.
ReplyDeleteI think you guys could’ve tried to condense your presentation down just a bit for time purposes.
I liked that you had a broad range of his contributions to the world other than the more commonly known theories and objects.
ReplyDeleteHaving more visuals would've been helpful but not necessary.
1. The presentation gave a good overview of his life and contributions- going beyond his work with just improving the spyglass.
ReplyDelete2. The presentation was smooth until the ending, where it seemed you stumbled a bit with the conclusion.