2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.
The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.
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| This murderous event took place in 1995, and before September 11, 2001, it was purportedly the worst recorded terrorist attack to ever take place on U.S. soil. |
Great job! The detailed information about the cases of McVeigh and Nichol was very interesting. Details like 168 deaths including 19 children gave perspective on the bombing. I think adding more civilian input would have enhanced the presentation.
ReplyDelete1.I really liked the video showing the perspectives of different people and their thoughts on who was responsible for the bombings.
ReplyDelete2. I think the presentation could have been a little shorter and could've focused more on certain topics instead of including short sections of information, if that makes sense. I think it would've helped to shorten the time if the focus was more on specific, certain topics. Great job guys!
1: it was good that you showed how different people saw the bombing and how it effected so many people, since the event killed alot of people.
ReplyDelete2: I would focus more on broad subjects like the construction of the bomb and go into more detail on the escape routes used.
1. I think that your details were very good and that you guys explained the presence around the attack very well.
ReplyDelete2. I also think that you gave us too much information at some points, which could have contributed to the time but I liked the video of civilian reaction.
1. I found your presentation to be very informative. There were many details and point of views.
ReplyDelete2. I also think you could've left out the video to save some time, & just share the link with us to watch on our own time.
1. Your presentation was very interesting even though the topic was upsetting. It seemed like you were very knowledgeable on the topic and I enjoyed your incorporation of the video clip as well.
ReplyDelete2. Although I really liked the video I think it could have been cut down a little bit to shorten the time, since although it made the presentation more interesting there were places that could have been cut out.
1. You guys had a lot of information and you guys really knew what you were talking about. I also enjoyed the video, and I thought it added a lot to the presentation and gave us a different view.
ReplyDelete2. You guys had a huge topic that probably could've been talked about for hours. I think if you condensed it down and dug deeper, it may have been a little more effective.
I thought the information was greatly used and gave us a very good knowledge over the subject
ReplyDeleteone thing that could be worked on is the time maybe just focus on one idea with the OKC bombings but it is a huge subject so I still thought you guys did great
1. The information was very thorough and you shed light on a very Gloomy subject that not many people knew about.
ReplyDelete2. It went very long and I also think the videe, though very good, took away from the subject a bit and made the presentation take a bit longer
1. Amazing job with info and the dramatic intro it really helped to set the mood to more serious and really draw us in.
ReplyDelete2. Time and practice, I feel that if more practice had been done and lines read through a couple more times then you could have saved a lot of time. Great job overall!
1. I really liked how you included the video of the coverage, it helped us understand what the people were feeling at the time. I also felt that you researched your topic well and had a good knowledge of the subject.
ReplyDelete2. One thing that I think could be fixed was the fluency of the slides and how many words were on the slides.
I liked the way how you guys explained everything so well even though there was a lot to cover.Including videos was a plus point in your presentation.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing that you could change was focusing on the time limit and maybe just decreasing the amount of content on your slides.
1. You included a lot of information it was clear you did research.
ReplyDelete2. It would be nice if you included information and talked in a way that grabbed the readers attention and helped them stay focused.
1. I thought you guys used good images and had lots of facts.
ReplyDelete2. I thought the video showed in your presentation was a bit long and drawn out and could probably remove it all together.
1. I liked how you guys were very neutral in your presentation, and just presented the facts and story of what happened.
ReplyDelete2. I would have liked to have gotten more background on the two responsible for what happened.
1- Your presentation was very informative and kept at a very factual stand point. I liked how you explained the relationship between the two bombers and how they ended up after it all took place.
ReplyDelete2- I think time was not your friend for this one understanding there was a lot of information in this presentation it needed practiced a lot before hand.