Tuesday, November 21, 2017

Comments for Hannah and Gracie





1-- Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group.  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.

The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.

14 comments:

  1. This was well done because I feel like I obtained a fair amount of knowledge about someone I didn't know. I learned about what kind of work Warhol did with other artist of different kinds. I think if you would have showed more of his work to give us more of a visual of his style it would have benefited the presentation.

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  2. 1. I learned a lot about Warhol throughout this presentation as I had never really even heard of him before. Your presentation was engaging and kept me entertained with your variety of colorful and detailed pictures, interesting facts, as well as sure and confident tone.

    2. Although probably more of an opinion I would have loved to see a little bit more of his work since it was so eccentric and fascinating that I was left wanting just a little bit more of that when the presentation ended.

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  3. 1. I didnt know Andy Warhol before because at first I thought he was an author but now I feel as if I have known him for awhile. Very knowledgeable presentation.
    2. I would have liked to see more of his paintings and his art work, maybe just some pictures on the slides and you describing them.

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  4. 1. I had really no idea about Warhol except that he painted a campbells soup can which was apparently really cool I'm that time but this presentation gave a lot of good info that I had never heard of.
    2. I think it would have been good to mabye have some more of his art on the slides and when they were painted mabye

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  5. 1: I thought you did a good job of showing who Warhol was, especially to people who really didnt know him at all.
    2: I think you could have shown more of his actual artwork personally. Sinc eit was such a big part of who he was.

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  6. 1. I learned a lot about Andy Warhol and how he's been a major influence to American Pop Art.
    2. I would've liked to know how much artwork Andy did and if celebrities paid him to draw them or if he just drew them himself. Good job!

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  7. 1.I really liked your guys project it was very informational and i was very intrigued by the topic.
    2.I feel more practice could have been used to help it flow better.

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  8. 1. I think you did a good job with showing lots of examples of his art and lifestyle.
    2. I think it would of been beneficial to practice the presentation before that way you wouldn't have to read from a script the whole time

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  9. 1. I found this presentation very interesting because I am in a photography class and we have talked about him before and I feel the information was presented in a good order.

    2. One thing that I saw/felt was a little confusion of what to say with the slides. I could totally understand how this could just be nerves, presentations can be very daunting.

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  10. I really enjoyed your guys’ presentation and found it really interesting. I like how you guys discussed his upcoming and how he became the artist he was.

    I think if you would’ve made the slides more visual that could’ve added to the presentation! We could’ve had something to look at and see his artwork really show through.

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  11. 1. I loved how you showed his fear of becoming irrelevant and related it to him calling out the media with his art.

    2. I think that showing more of his commissioned work, such as the album art that a classmate mentioned, would have improved the presentation.

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  12. I really liked your guys presentation because I did not have any knowledge on who Andy Warhol was, but the presentation really made me understand a lot about him.

    It would have been better if you guys added more slides on his famous works.

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  13. Your presentation was interesting and I feel like I learned a lot about Andy Warhol.

    I would've liked to see more of his artwork used in the slides.

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  14. 1. Your presentation gave a lot of good information, and gave a good picture of who Andy Warhol was.
    2. Either more pictures of Andy Warhol or putting a picture of him earlier might help people put a face to the artist for more of the presentation.

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