2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.
The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.
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| Apple pies and cheeseburgers are classically American foods that represent more than just themselves. |
Great job on the presentation! The background information that stated that apples and hamburgers didn't come from America was interesting. The interesting facts like "The average American eats three burgers a week" was a nice addition to the presentation. I think making it more clear on why thanksgiving was included in the presentation would have gave a benefit to the audience's understanding.
ReplyDelete1. Even though im not a big fan of apple pie, i liked that you guys brought it in because it was a unique way of presenting your topic, great job on the presentation.
ReplyDelete2. I would have liked a little less words on the slides because I felt as if i never had time to look at you guys talking to me.
I really liked the creativity that you put into your presentation. It definitely made it more interesting.
ReplyDeleteSome parts I felt were a little off topic as interesting as they were.
1. The whole presentation was really good. I had no clue that apples and hamburgers didn't originate in America!
ReplyDelete2. The only thing I noticed was that the topics within your presentation jumped around a lot.
1. I loved the creativity behind your presentation especially with the compare and contrast as well as the mini apple pies which was an awesome touch.
ReplyDelete2. I kind of felt that the presentation didn't move from topic to topic in a smooth way giving you a feeling like it moved around a lot.
1. The samples were super good! I really enjoyed how you guys compared the popularity of the burger and apple pie to the Jollof rice and how it differs in flavors in different parts of Africa.
ReplyDelete2. I think it would've been a little better if there weren't as many words on the slides. I liked the pictures you guys put on them, but I think the words may have taken away from the attention to you guys speaking.
I loved the visual you guys brought in for the presentation, it was very good and included a great end to the presentation
ReplyDeleteI would have enjoyed a little more focus on the cheesburgers and what makes them American , but other than that it was awesome !
1. You had a very cool topic that was light hearted and informative I also liked how you brought in the little apple pies for everyone
ReplyDelete2. There was lots of information but some of it was a little off topic and somewhat came out of nowhere but still very interesting
1. I really liked how you tied this project to another background and showed how it could be related to an iconic item in another country!
ReplyDelete2. I feel that some parts were slightly tangent to the topic for instance I'm not sure how the intro with the pilgrims was tied into either of the subjects other than that fantastic job!
1. I liked the background you gave on the Applepie, going beyond when it was American.
ReplyDelete2. I felt as though it would have been helpful if you had gone into the same level as background for the hamburger, though the presentation was good regardless.
1. i loved you brought pie!! I also like how you compared it to pumpkin pie.
ReplyDelete2. How do you feel about the White Castle hamburgers.
1: The way you had food for a discussion about food in general was cool, you really brought people into the slide.
ReplyDelete2: You most likely should have discussed a hamburger itself as much.
1. I liked the background information you gave like apples are not native to America.
ReplyDelete2. The only thing about this presentation that I think could be improved upon was not reading directly from the presentation slides
1. Those mini pies were amazing!
ReplyDelete2. I would have liked to learn more about how these foods have been Americanized, if that makes any sense.
1- I loved how you explained African cuisine and how it differs from American food. Also how you tied Thanksgiving in with your presentation. I loved the touch of food at the end of your presentation.
ReplyDelete2- I think explanation on the origination of cheeseburgers would have completed your presentation.
I really liked your guys presentation a lot and I learnt a lot about the history of apple pie and cheeseburgers, and most importantly those mini pies were amazing.
ReplyDeleteI would have liked more information on cheeseburgers.