u1-- Write about
something well done. What did you learn from this group? What part
of the Presentation seemed the best?
2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.
The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.
2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.
The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.
1. I enjoyed how you made your presentation engaging and that it wasn't very text based but more so focused on pictures that signified important moments in her life. There was a lot of emotion and personality added into the presentations too which made it really fun to listen to.
ReplyDelete2. Although it's hard to find something to critique, I think that it would have been interesting to go a little more in depth about some more of the people who were involved in her life, rise, and fall from fame.
1. I really enjoyed learning about different aspects of Marilyn Monroe. There were any things that you guys discussed that I didn't know before your presentation.
ReplyDelete2. One thing that I would possibly fix would be going over more of what she was like during her prime. You did well on her beginning and end but I felt that information was thin in the middle.
1. I liked how John and Briana's thesis was set up in 3 parts and they explained each part thoroughly.
ReplyDelete2. I feel like there could have been a little bit more information about her death and how that affected and changed the public's view on the sex industry.
1. The facts you had for her personal life were very informative. I was engaged during the entirety of the presentation.
ReplyDelete2. The only thing I wish you guys would've added more of were facts about her career, other than the movies she was in.
1. I thought their thesis was set up really nice and was easy to follow throughout the presentation. I also thought the way they spoke was great. It was more conversational and less formal.
ReplyDelete2. I really enjoyed this but one thing they could've changed is maybe less words on some of the slides and more focus on the actual picture.
1.Great job on this presentation, I personally thought it was important to see the other side to Marilyn Monroe that most do not see.
ReplyDelete2.One of the only things I could see that could have been improved was presenting the project rather than focusing on reading from the paper, other than that great job!
1. I thought both of you did a really good job with maintaining eye contact with the audience which showed that you really knew your topic well.
ReplyDelete2. One thing I wish you would of done more of was talk about the conspiracy theory's of her death weather and if you believe them or not and give evidence as to why you thought that.
I liked the was that you guys presented the information to us! I also liked the costume ideas for this project, it was a unique way of presenting your topic.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I wish you guys spend a little more time on was her drug addiction and how she came to having a drug addiction in her life.
1. I liked how you made a comparison of Monroe to Adele, it was interesting and I have never paired them together before.
ReplyDelete2. Her childhood sounded very interesting and I was wondering what made her able to pull through, also you said her husband was abusive, more information on what her husband was like would be interesting.
1. It was really good that you used your slides as a talking point and not just putting all your info on there and reading off of it, also the way you guys dressed up for your presentation was awesome
ReplyDelete2. I think you could have mabye had a bit more information on some of the subjects like her death and her addiction with drugs which was a big part of her death that made it famous
1: I liked how you had alot to speak about and mostly used the pictures as a way to discuss the large amount you had to say on Marylin.
ReplyDelete2: The only thing i could see you making better would be adding more text to your slides.
I really enjoyed the humor that was used in the presentation. It made something that is relatively sad a bit more light-hearted.
ReplyDeleteI feel like having more information from the peak of her career would've been interesting- even if it is common knowledge.
I thought the use of the slides in the presentation brought me back to the time line and life or Marilyn Monroe
ReplyDeleteThe one thing I thought could be more useful is display how the effect of exploitation was the downfall of her career
I really liked how you described the other side of Marilyn Monroe that most of us did not know about until your presentation.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing that I thought was missing was more information on what she used to do other than just being a public figure.
1. I liked that you guys made your thesis very clear. Also, the 3 parts made it very effective.
ReplyDelete2. If you could improve anything, I would suggest giving more information or specific examples on how the public reacted to Monroe.